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				<pubDate>Sat, 25 May 2013 19:41:51 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Rookierookie</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>1630086</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>I get it. D-class are expendable. But given that we know how punching a hole through the container stops its effects, won't it make sense to give test subjects equipment that can penetrate the container, say a battery-powered industrial power drill? And there needs to be at least a reference to how remote communication works or does not work, because no one in their right mind would send a test subject in without means of direct communication, if at all possible.</p> <p>And this:</p> <blockquote> <p>Subjects were interred within SCP-728 with enough rations to last all three men five years</p> </blockquote> <p>If the container doesn't have waste disposal, I doubt they'll last a week.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 15 Apr 2013 17:42:36 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Gaffney</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>1324229</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>Idea is eh and the last bit reminds me of the Russian sleep experiment (and not in a good way). Not bad enough for a down vote, but this just does nothing for me.</p> 
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				<title>Staff Post</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 15 Apr 2013 16:10:06 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Roget</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>1229263</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>This article is being placed up for review. Please take the time to check it out, it could use more attention.</p> <hr /> <p>I like this one, but I think it would definitely be better without the redaction. Perhaps some examples from the journals or summat. It's close to being a really great scp, but ends up being a just okay one.</p> 
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				<title>Re: DOWNVOTED</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jan 2012 15:42:03 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>What he says.</p> <p>I'd imagine [REDACTED] and [DATA EXPUNGED] would be used as part of <em>high</em> security clearance. I don't think the Foundation runs around handing out these documentations to civs, so a lot of the time it's pointless to redact information on a form that only they have access to.</p> 
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				<title>DOWNVOTED</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jan 2012 22:35:57 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>For pointless, inconsequential redaction. I have a challenge for you, the same as for anyone else. Don't just go [lolhurrdurrredacted] for something you think should be unnerving or scary. Come on, challenge yourself and the reader. See if you can honestly make it creepy without being cheesy. See if you can legitimately make it a little scary to ponder the consequences of. Cuz as it stands, most of the time, it just ends up with, &quot;Huh, well, I guess this could have been more interesting if the author had bothered to actually come up with something here.&quot; Think of something terrifying and *write* it. Ask yourself, is there a legitimate reason the number of years would be classified? We know it's less than 10. And why would the description of injuries be so horrible as to &quot;redact&quot; them when you can find much worse things described elsewhere? The people reading the document ostensibly see worse shit than a disembowelment most times, so put a little effort into it and come up with something that makes me either go &quot;wow&quot; or that makes me give a damn.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Wed, 14 Sep 2011 19:55:15 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Actually , there was a (i think) soviet sci-fi story that was &quot;almost&quot; this, but done intentionally - the researchers closed a bunch of scientists in a bunker with plenty supplies etc , and the idea he'll accelerate time and they'll solve some important problems. They got unexpected results and when one of the researchers tested it, they found out the effect was rather more potent (About 100 fold) - he died of old age inside, and the reason for the offspring of the scientists being odd is that they were closed up for about 1000k years.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Sun, 14 Aug 2011 00:12:20 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Primer?</p> 
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				<pubDate>Sun, 14 Aug 2011 00:11:27 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>I mean, the log where subjects apparently went a number of years in the box, and were told to keep journals. The length of time the journals were written in was blanked. For some reason.</p> 
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				<title>Re: All in all not bad but...</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 13 Aug 2011 23:38:23 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>It's poorly worded more than anything. I'm going to work on it, I think.</p> 
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				<title>All in all not bad but...</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 13 Aug 2011 18:00:50 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>&#8230;the bit about stopwatches not working while watches do is downright stupid.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Sat, 13 Aug 2011 00:38:11 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Kickassfrog</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>819187</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>It got better, although it's borderline vote and Bright voted it down</p> <p>I think it's better now though, so upvoted</p> 
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				<pubDate>Wed, 10 Aug 2011 04:01:49 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>I've always assumed that the blanking out the years is like when Capcom set all the Megaman games in 200X. Avoid dating the article too solidly.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Wed, 10 Aug 2011 04:01:04 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>I get The Jaunt vibes from this, as well as That Movie Involving Something Like This Whose Movie Title Was In Wires And Was Incredibly Confusing As All Hell vibes.</p> <p>Upvoted.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Tue, 09 Aug 2011 04:21:28 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>You probably have some auto correct in whatever you were posting with, because <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clich%C3%A9">cliché</a> wasn't wrong.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Tue, 09 Aug 2011 03:17:50 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Why was the number of the years the logs were kept blacked out? Surely that information isn't sensitive.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Tue, 09 Aug 2011 03:09:05 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Nonalyth</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>1100063</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>God damn it how did that happen.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Tue, 09 Aug 2011 02:40:14 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>I suggest you remove the apostrophe you're raping &quot;cliches&quot; with.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Tue, 09 Aug 2011 02:10:36 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Improved. Upvoting.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Tue, 09 Aug 2011 00:43:33 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>All right, rewritten. Took out clichés, expanded log to include gory details. Awaiting further suggestions.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 20:37:57 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>This simply is not very interesting. Will keep checking for improvements, though, since the author is still working..</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 20:32:28 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Well, for starters, the foundation would probably try locking someone in with a supply of food and water- that way, if it skips them a week ahead they'll still be alive to answer questions- also, it would allow you to use the going crazy/isolation thing in the experiment logs.</p> <p>It could probably also do without being indestructible- just make it a standard shipping container with the weird time effect, maybe highly resilient to corrosion or rust (which would give the foundation something more to study, since 'twould be more of an asset than time room)- or add something else in if that's a bit too plain. I would say voices that tell the person they'll be trapped for eternity, but that may be in violation of a cliche as well.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 20:22:54 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>What? I mean&#8230; What? I don't even know what to say about that, but that is thinking to hard&#8230; anyway there is no guarantee that it will travel backwards and not forwards&#8230;</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 19:25:05 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Could the Foundation mass-produce 85-90% pure oxygen by using time traveling D-Class within the container along with several containers of carbon dioxide? Very pure oxygen approaches costs of 2.50$ per gram, which can be sold or kept for medical purposes.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 19:20:38 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Why would anyone want to take a mountain peak into&#8230;</p> <p>Oh, wait.</p> <p>The word you're looking for is PEEK.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 19:16:43 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Now, now that is to go into too many details ¬¬</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 19:14:33 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Would the oxygen content within the container have increased? Would this make the individual need an amount of carbon dioxide to properly respire?</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 19:05:10 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Bingo</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 18:24:51 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>Or he could come out younger not knowing how he got there in the first place.</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 18:16:20 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>I'm not sure if you could screw backwards in time, as it would imply the test subject exit the box and reappear at some point elsewhere when he or she was performing a task in the past.</p> <p>It would seem interesting, however, for high or extremely low pitched knocking to be coming from inside the box.</p> 
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						 <p>Aye, the SCP could kick some serious ass without all these other details weighing it down. Compare:</p> <p>1. An isolation box that screws with time of anyone in it, backwards and forwards.</p> <p>2. An isolation box that screws with time of anyone in it, backwards and forwards.And we don't know what it is made of. And its indestructible. And it might be a portal to another world. And it's dimensions are impossible. And&#8230;</p> 
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Aug 2011 17:58:21 +0000</pubDate>
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						 <p>The concept is an interesting prospect, and therefore I offer an upvote, pending the removal of the cliche components as stipulated by the other commentators.</p> 
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						 <p>Isn't/wasn't there a microwave that did this?</p> <p>Edit: Yup - <a href="http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-119">SCP-119</a> Not exactly but I suppose this thing could have shipped a few palettes of SCP-119.</p> 
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						 <p>Blegh, downvoted for being really, really, really mediocre. It is well written and the tone is solid, but the idea itself just does nothing for me. It's a box that makes time flow weird&#8230;.so? This lacks any kind of hook to grab and hold my attention.</p> <p>Also, I know some people will disagree strongly with me, but I don't think you need to cover your ass from inquiries at every turn. The interior doesn't need to be indestructible; the Foundation probably wouldn't risk destroying the object by damaging the interior unless we have reason to believe there was something genuinely valuable to be gained in doing so. Also, why wouldn't an hourglass work (I mean both in universe and out). It is completely illogical for it to not work since really ANYTHING can be used to track time if you know how. I get that you added it, though, as a way to prevent people reading this from poking holes in it. What I don't get it what good it does the article? So what if we can record exactly what the time dilation effects are? What is the harm in that?</p> 
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						 <p>Except it would probably not degrade all that much since it would randomly become newer as well.</p> <p>I don't see why it should be indestructable, as tuomey said you aren't gonna punch a hole through metal.</p> <p>The addendum of the doctor's theory doesn't add to what the SCP actually is, it is just a doctor raving. If something interestin actually came out of that, then holy capoly there's a reason the addendum is there. Hell you could have him expriment log that and have him end up being a twitching fetus as a result.</p> 
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						 <p>Only the interior is indestructible, the exterior is as vulnerable as any standard shipping container. So if his theory is correct, you could remove the majority of the container and the portal would still work. If he's wrong, and the container is a vital piece of the object, the whole thing could go tits up.</p> <p>Another reason the interior needs to be indestructible is to resist the progress of time. For all anyone knows, thousands of millennia could have passed inside the room, and any standard material would have degraded in that amount of time. I'm open to alternatives though.</p> 
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						 <p>A guy isn't going to be able to punch through metal with his bare hands and the foundation probably doesn't want to just punch holes in things all the time.</p> <p>(Plus, the doctor mentions not wanting to damage such an interesting object - kind of pointless since you can't if it's impossible to damage it.)</p> <p>Holding off on voting for now.</p> 
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						 <p>I can fix this. I'll strain out all the clichés I can, but a few of them are necessary.</p> <p>1: The interior has to be indestructible, otherwise someone would punch a hole in it and take a peek outside.<br /> 2: If it's indestructible, you can't really test it thoroughly, so it's going to be unknown. What if I added a few more details about the material from non-invasive tests/observations?<br /> 3: It also has to be some kind of portal, otherwise you could punch a hole in the exterior and take a peek <em>in</em>side.</p> <p>The impossible dimensions thing can be taken out, you're right about that.</p> <p>As for the Experiment log, I did think about having the mummified guy go crazy and write stuff on the walls. The problem is, he's not in there for all eternity, only until he dies of dehydration. A few days isn't enough time to start flinging faeces, if you know what I mean. The last entry was supposed to suggest shenanigans, with the internment of multiple subjects allowing for acts of violence and cannibalism, but I went for the less is more approach. Maybe it's not quite enough. I'll try to add a few more grotesque elements.</p> <p>Tomorrow, though. It's 1am and time to sleep.</p> 
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						 <p>Kind of like this. Reminds me of that story <em>The Jaunt</em>. That said, there is some extraneous stuff. The addendum is unnecessary, and barely contradicts the statement that the SCP is indestructible (which incidentally, it shouldn't be). And the experiment log doesn't add as much as it ought. But still, a decent first effort.</p> 
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						 <p>Please tell me this is a list of cliche's and related to Bright's challenge.</p> <p>If not&#8230; Please go read the cliche list.</p> <p>Also:</p> <blockquote> <p>constructed from an unknown material</p> </blockquote> <p>Here we go&#8230;</p> <blockquote> <p>proven to be completely impervious to damage</p> </blockquote> <p>No thank you.</p> <blockquote> <p>impossible dimensions</p> </blockquote> <p>There is already an SCP that does this, and is probably better than this.</p> <blockquote> <p>the doors of the container act as a portal to the interior</p> </blockquote> <p>There are already a city full of portal SCP's that do various weird and odd things, they are pretty much better than this</p> <blockquote> <p>the entire Experimentation Log</p> </blockquote> <p>Look, this does't make it more interesting nor does it tell us more about it than we already know.</p> <p>To be frank, the idea of being alone and confused and frightend in a room for all eternity, isolated so that no matter how long a person screams no one can hear him, whatnot, sounds great. However, all the OTHER things tacked on detract from that potential horror, until you just have a mess of 'interesting' details that lose the core of the SCP- a box that messes with time when you shove people in it. It also brings up the question do they just sit there, do they scream or cry or scrape against the walls so hard their nails break? If it were mere after a time i would be writing 'time time time' and various clocks in various positions with my own blood evrywhere because isolation does horrible things to a psyche. If a person became a child would they remember everything that had happened to them prior to their age-change or do their memories revert? If a person stays there long enough, what happens if they need to poop or pee? What if they're hungry or thirsty?</p> <p><strong>Final Report:</strong></p> <p>SCP that buries its hook with a buncha unnecessary details. Downvoted.</p> 
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