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First SCP. I feel like it's a bit too long, so any suggestions on how to cut it down while retaining the meaning would be appreciated. Would also love any feedback from anyone with expertise in math or physics, or anyone familiar with academia. Thank you!
by: MissMercurialMissMercurial
08 Dec 2013 19:23
3 by MissMercurialMissMercurial
10 Dec 2013 03:50 Jump!
A re-write of my last draft from 6 months ago
by: Dr CuddlesDr Cuddles
08 Dec 2013 05:20
2 by AccelerandoAccelerando
09 Dec 2013 23:56 Jump!
In which I attempt to breathe some life into an old draft that's been sitting in my sandbox since October.
by: RedGrouseRedGrouse
09 Dec 2013 18:51
5 by (account deleted)
09 Dec 2013 20:07 Jump!
Ever wondered what that thing was in that photo from Apollo 12?
by: Doctor DuncecapDoctor Duncecap
09 Dec 2013 17:46
2 by IhpIhp
09 Dec 2013 18:03 Jump!
by: thefranthefran
09 Dec 2013 16:19
3 by thefranthefran
09 Dec 2013 16:29 Jump!
Basically, it is make up that turns you into a literal cougar.
by: Monocle MinotaurMonocle Minotaur
09 Dec 2013 01:26
6 by IhpIhp
09 Dec 2013 04:07 Jump!
After my last try turned to be a failure; I cut my losses, then went to the drawing board and sat down to write a new one.
by: SyephousSyephous
08 Dec 2013 15:12
3 by SyephousSyephous
08 Dec 2013 19:07 Jump!
Bugger it, bring the spears.
by: virtipvirtip
07 Dec 2013 22:25
19 by virtipvirtip
08 Dec 2013 07:48 Jump!
My very first SCP, I'm very excited to post this when I get the chance. Please critique fairly.
by: SyephousSyephous
08 Dec 2013 05:24
11 by SyephousSyephous
08 Dec 2013 07:23 Jump!
by: Doctor DuncecapDoctor Duncecap
06 Dec 2013 01:05
6 by HorologerHorologer
08 Dec 2013 05:17 Jump!
1st Attempt
by: CC_OperatorCC_Operator
07 Dec 2013 00:37
6 by CC_OperatorCC_Operator
07 Dec 2013 20:08 Jump!
The 2nd Attempt by ThatNERD
by: ThatNERDThatNERD
05 Dec 2013 23:06
3 by LongWayHomeLongWayHome
07 Dec 2013 19:52 Jump!
The Foundation never underestimates an opponent.
by: ConceptualizerConceptualizer
07 Dec 2013 11:32
6 by ConceptualizerConceptualizer
07 Dec 2013 19:24 Jump!
by: acc1177acc1177
01 Dec 2013 15:33
8 by thedeadlymoosethedeadlymoose
07 Dec 2013 07:50 Jump!
So, this is my first attempt at an SCP, got a draft. The SCP is heavily based off 'The Screecher', the Don't Starve conversion. Please suggest, criticize and/or go apeshit against this draft.
by: RedOctoberRedOctober
06 Dec 2013 01:46
6 by HorologerHorologer
07 Dec 2013 06:05 Jump!
I'm new and since, statistically, my first scp will most likely be deleted, I'm doing a holiday one. Please feel free to give it your worst. I'm posting either way but I still want to make a good first impression.
by: BryxBryx
07 Dec 2013 00:06
8 by ZynZyn
07 Dec 2013 04:08 Jump!
by: DrSoarynDrSoaryn
05 Dec 2013 15:48
6 by DrSoarynDrSoaryn
07 Dec 2013 00:43 Jump!
Of course it's SCP-2000, what else would it be?
by: FantemFantem
20 Nov 2013 14:52
19 by FantemFantem
06 Dec 2013 20:19 Jump!
You are assigned in the decoy Council, also known as O5 Command.
by: ChoiwelChoiwel
06 Dec 2013 17:16
17 by SmaptiSmapti
06 Dec 2013 18:57 Jump!
by: Doctor XincDoctor Xinc
04 Dec 2013 21:31
3 by ChoiwelChoiwel
06 Dec 2013 18:51 Jump!
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