Jared Mojave, this feedback is vague and misleading.
It is really good!
What about the draft did you think was "really good"? Why? If other reviewers aren't as impressed by the draft (as is the case with the second reviewer here, who speaks more accurately about how the community will react) what are the strengths of the piece that the author can focus on when they make edits?
Great idea!
Again, what about the idea is "great"?
As a general note, if you're relatively new to the site and have not had much experience reviewing or writing, please let authors know so they don't accidentally post their work prematurely to the mainsite. Misleading feedback can result in an author getting the wrong impression of their work, and may lead to them posting a page that is not yet ready for the mainsite, and then getting slammed with a bunch of downvotes that they don't expect.