mouse_potato, this feedback is vague and not particularly helpful.
It will make a rating module so I can upvote it
Rating modules are disabled on the mainsite, so some authors don't include them.
because, as far as I can tell, it's pretty good.
What about this is "pretty good"? What specifically did you like about the piece?
(But then again, you might want to get a review from someone more experienced than me before posting. Have you asked on chat yet?)
If you're going to try giving feedback in the forums, try to at least respond to specifics rather than posting a generic response that could be interpreted as relating to any number of drafts. Furthermore, the point of the forums is to help the author improve their work. If you don't have anything to say in that regard, let someone else handle making the first post.