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I'm overall unsure if I should also have a series of journal entries describing how he got it and his train of thought into writing the document and so on. Additionally I would like critique on the two other ideas below in the tabview "More Than a Mask" and "RING_CLASSY_EN", however those are secondary as Goal Oriented Thinking is my current focus. Not "SCP-4241 - The Skinman", that's my last SCP that got deleted, hope to rewrite it but as it is it's just there for me to get to "eventually".Thank you in advance, still fairly new to the place.

Please use separate threads per draft, otherwise things will get very confused quickly.

Conceptually… it's okay. Why that person knows anything vaguely SCP-ish is hard to postulate by itself - together with the 'brain wave' the whole thing is a bit hard to swallow. It's also not particularly complex and doesn't leave much of an opening for further explanation or narrative.

Execution-wise, you have a lot of grammar issues. Missing apostrophes and punctuation, etc. The writing is a bit stilted and not pleasant to read. It also seems like this isn't a stylistic decision. In general, it's just awkward writing - which I cannot recommend anything but more reading and more practice.

Consider using the Ideas and Brainstorming forum as well before writing your ideas into drafts.