SCP Foundation

There's nothing inherently wrong about this article. There's a decent premise here, the article has good grammar and spelling, it hits all the checkmarks. To be completely honest, though, it just doesn't hit the mark for me. I'm not sure if I can put it into words why, but I'll do my best.

The concept here feels like a Mary Sue - someone so absolutely powerful he can just do whatever he wants and the Foundation is on its knees - probably because that's exactly what it is, and exactly what you've written. It honestly just doesn't jive with me, and I'm not sure how much else I can offer you here. Even if its well written, I'd have to downvote this.