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Here's the link to everything I have so far. I was told to come back here and brainstorm ways to make it a little more interesting to read and add a few more ideas.

http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/connor-blake

In summary, it's a book that has the soul of a 12-year-old girl in it. She documents her surroundings in the book (her diary) as if she was a person. She can respond to questions by writing the scenario and her response in the diary.

Locking this thread as another exists for the same concept in progress. Reviewers, please comment here: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10175963/maria-brooks-age-12

As noted in the ideas forum guidelines: authors, please do not create multiple threads for the same working concept. Using one thread helps keep spam down, and prevents flooding of the forums with repeat threads. Furthermore, it helps reviewers a lot if all corresponding feedback is kept in one place so they can follow the development of the idea and its details.