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I'm looking for feedback on my first SCP. I'm mostly looking for feedback on my word choice since I don't feel too confident on my "precise and concise" execution. I'm sure the description is probably a little longer than it needs to be so anything to trim down would be good to know as well. I know there's a lot of run on sentences as well. I'd also like to know general impressions.

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I'm going to be blunt: Judging by the description's similarity to your Wikidot avatar, it's clear you tried to make your OC into an SCP, and it doesn't work. For one thing, it's another dime-a-dozen boring superpowered humanoid who is invincible, and that makes for a really boring SCP. For another, what you've got here is the description of a character, but you don't have a story around that character. And writing a character in a vacuum often means that that character stays dull, static, and boring.

I'd recommend going back to The Ideas and Brainstorming forum before coming back here, as well as reading How to Write an SCP and So you want to write a Humanoid SCP Object.

Posting at OP’s request.

Critique coming sometime today or tomorrow.