I'm looking for feedback on my first SCP. I'm mostly looking for feedback on my word choice since I don't feel too confident on my "precise and concise" execution. I'm sure the description is probably a little longer than it needs to be so anything to trim down would be good to know as well. I know there's a lot of run on sentences as well. I'd also like to know general impressions.
First SCP critique "the hungering abyss"
Summary:
Looking for general feedback and help on word choice.
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