Hello, first time writer of SCPs and I wanted to show my idea to see if it is good enough to post.
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im also very fresh to the sight and wanted to run my first work past someone.Its a tale of a character id like to have in my future works.please all criticism is good criticism.
Uh, just so you know, you're supposed to post unfinished drafts in the Drafts and Critique forum, and not on somebody else's thread.
This seems very out of character for The Factory: unless they suddenly started manufacturing stuff to pull very malicious pranks on others, this has no reason for anyone to use them. Instead it mimicks a regular product and harms people.
Regardless of that, this is not interesting. Other "hurting items" have at least something else why they are so disturbing or at least (and seriously, most people nowadays don't care for this) have some well-done body horror attached to them. Throwing stuff like "it's made of humans" really doesn't mask the fact that it's fundamentally boring.