SCP Foundation

This has kind of been my baby for the past months. It's a tale. A collection of documents really. I need a good title, so I'm working on that. Grammar suffers at a few points. I've had some say that it has great potential, others say it's boring. My critiques have been very polarized. I will be creating an expanded universe for my "Site 863." It is politically charged if you are able to read into it. Yes, it is an old monster type, but I wanted it to be more about the story. That is why much of the info on N. anomalum is collapsed. By the by, I know the picture used for the life cycle is the life cycle of Pfiesteria piscicida so please take it with a few kilos of salt.

Many thanks to katus for editing the image. Many thanks to Photosynthetic for taxonomy help.

http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/aleks-vlastnik

What actually makes this anomalous, rather than just an unusually deadly fungal infection? Why is the Foundation dealing with it rather than, say, the WHO? Maybe you have this buried somewhere in the article, but if not, it's a common pitfall with disease-type drafts.

Your tone and formatting looks really good, though, so if you can work that in it's worth working on. It's quite wordy, but has promise. The foundation works with anomalies, though, so you'll have to deal with that first.