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Hello ladies and gents! I'm Mr Compassionate and this is my first time posting on SCP or Wikidot.

My first draft of Sound Burrower (working title) is here:[http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/mr-compassionate]

Let me know what I need to improve.

Edit: Thank you everybody for the feedback! Over the past few days I've had some really great suggestions on this forum and I've made sure to improve where suggested.

I don't try my hand at creative writing often but it was nice of the community to take some time to give pointers to a newbie. I was a little nervous at first, committing roughly a day so research alone and hours further still to writing the first draft. It was an effort but not a vain one.

Anyway my next draft, re-titled "The Absent Interest" as suggest by Nothere123, will include such improvements as "helplessly try to break into an insular community" and "redacted" and " ". I feel a little embarrassed I didn't notice these problems with the SCP before but I guess that's just inexperience.

One last thing! I'm still having trouble with exact pointers as to how to add pictures. I can't quite find the button at the bottom of the screen that imports the image from my computer.

Drafts don't go in forum threads, they go in the sandbox where you link to for people to look at drafts. Make a sandbox with your username and then link to it with the draft in it.

EDIT: To add images, go to the bottom of your sandbox and click files, then upload an image from your computer to the page. Then follow the steps in the How to Write an SCP page to embed it in the page.