Hello ladies and gents! I'm Mr Compassionate and this is my first time posting on SCP or Wikidot.
My first draft of Sound Burrower (working title) is here:[http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/mr-compassionate]
Let me know what I need to improve.
Edit: Thank you everybody for the feedback! Over the past few days I've had some really great suggestions on this forum and I've made sure to improve where suggested.
I don't try my hand at creative writing often but it was nice of the community to take some time to give pointers to a newbie. I was a little nervous at first, committing roughly a day so research alone and hours further still to writing the first draft. It was an effort but not a vain one.
Anyway my next draft, re-titled "The Absent Interest" as suggest by Nothere123, will include such improvements as "helplessly try to break into an insular community" and "redacted" and " ". I feel a little embarrassed I didn't notice these problems with the SCP before but I guess that's just inexperience.
One last thing! I'm still having trouble with exact pointers as to how to add pictures. I can't quite find the button at the bottom of the screen that imports the image from my computer.