SCP Foundation

Thanks to Scantron, MrCobalt, and qntm for the feedback.

http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/dreamwalkerfae
Tab "SCP entry XXXX".

Was "cureent" and "376854937859385nghridr465838" intentional? I get the feeling that it's supposed to be Junior Researcher Blackbox editing the document, but I'm not sure.

This feels too short. The concept is great and the note at the end is pretty good, but there needs to be more buildup. I'd suggest increasing the length of the SCP somehow, and adding in other areas where it becomes increasingly obvious Junior Researcher Blackbox is attempting to communicate, to build up to the final note.

This personally didn't grab me, partially because it was so sparse. More detail would be nice, but there's so little here I'm not sure what else to request?

This line in particular struck a chord with me, though:

Imagine that you have no body except for the words you say.

I had an idea a while back for a sapient spam bot, who perceived the Internet (its world) solely through text. The words it wrote were its body, which meant it experienced excruciating pain whenever one of its spammy emails or YouTube comments was deleted (because it was like having a limb amputated, from its perspective).

I ultimately decided not pursue it primarily because I'm not 100% sure how spambots actually work, haha. But maybe you could expand on that idea some more? What's it like to go from a human being to something whose entire world is text?

Rewritten with critique from chat, mainly thekillerax. Enjoy.