http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/zoro4661
I'd like to have some criticism on my first attempt at making an SCP. Since my native language is german, I'd appreciate it if you would tell me about any language mistakes I made.
There are some things with this draft that I'm not sure about yet:
- The interview might be too long.
- I was thinking about adding a picture of SCP-XXXXs gun (this one), but I don't know if it would do the draft any good.
- The description is probably too long, but I don't know what to remove.