Okay, wow, I'm really scared to put the whole thing out there. I'm tentatively calling this the 'final' draft, but if it needs more work, so be it.
I have a couple things I would like to know, but by no means feel stuck to any guidelines.
-What did you like about my SCP?
-What did you dislike?
-Do you think it would survive as a Series III SCP?
-Would you vote up, down, or not at all?
As always, I appreciate all the help from everyone. Here's the link: http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/deacon-kessler
EDIT: Fixed the typo you pointed out, kilen, and noted.