Okay. There's a couple of obvious right-off-the-bat problems I can see here.
1. Redactions in the containment procedures. This information is all supposed to be stuff that the person hypothetically reading it will need to know and therefore the information shouldn't be redacted. There's some exceptions to this, but for example, why redact the name of the site the anomaly is contained in? The person reading it (unless they're an O5 or Site Director who would have clearance anyway) is literally in the site that refers to.
2. It's generally poor tone to use bolding for emphasis. It's meant to be a professional document, and honestly a big part of the horror for me is how the nasty little details don't stand out at all.
3. Rage states. People will call this out pretty quickly, because rage states are both overdone and pretty boring in the first place. 682 is the primary example of a successful rage state SCP, but that's both extremely old now, and also crosses the line twice with its absurdity. Played straight, rage states aren't going to impress anyone.
4. The interview log adds nothing. It's an interview with a rage stating madman who is, appropriately, stating his rage. It's nothing more than the original statement that the emerald is a cognitohazard that incites psychosis and violent behaviour.
The thing you need to ask yourself with this is: why is this here? The story about an object like this requires there to be some sort of backstory for the object. Who might use such an object? Why is it there? Just detailing an anomalous artefact isn't enough, the object is meant to be a springboard to tell a story. Is this a broken cryptid's ring? A malfunctioning cake decoration? The focusing crystal for an alien weapon that was designed to transform humanity into a raging population of beasts that could be transported to another planet as another move in an interstellar war we previously knew nothing about?
Edit: Here's the image block, just use this with an additional square bracket on the end:
[[include component:image-block
name={THE NAME OF YOUR IMAGE FILE}|
caption={THE TEXT YOU WANT SHOWN UNDERNEATH YOUR IMAGE}
]
