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Tale posted: http://www.scp-wiki.net/down-the-silver-river

http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/sunnyparallax The tale is in the first tab.

I was warned to not write a longer imagery-centered tale but this just came to me.

This tale used "the Flow" concept in my last tale Flow. I think this tale should work without reading Flow, but please tell me if I'm wrong or the concept is not clear in Down the Sliver River.

Perelka_L brought up the topic of how would CotGB affect an artist in a discussion with me, and this tale is an attempt to cover that.

Speacial thanks to Fantem who helped me with grammar. Any critique is welcomed, and thank you very much.

A few grammar corrections:

I quite like the piece, you've got a man metaphorically and literally falling apart and having to put himself back together. An ambiguous ending, and the phrasing and imagery is quite good. I can see this in my mind's eye very easily.

I like it. Good luck with the posting.

Pretty cool. Felt like it was covering territory that's been done on the site before, but that's not a bad thing. Kind of a throwback to old-school cotbg stuff. It echoes the tone I get in that Gears tale about the creation of 914, and the clockwork servants story.

Liked it. Would upvote.