Thanks for all critique.
EDIT: Forgot to mention the draft is in the second tab.
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It is a pretty standard concept with nothing new to add. You didn't explain enough about the kidnapped college student to make me care about his abduction. The dialogue doesn't resemble a normal human conversation (if he doesn't remember who he is and is being held against his will, why is he so calm?). Mostly, there are too many questions that I am left asking and not enough answers provided.
Thank you for the critique.
From critique and responses on chat from various users, I had the idea that this had potential. I apologise for it being vague, so this here is the basic meaning. This might be useful if you don't know it already.