This is what I have so far. Any suggestions?
Link no longer takes you to the draft.
This is pretty straightforward. There's a "drives you crazy" element, which is somewhat bluntly executed. Beyond that the main character calling himself Mr. Scratch is far too on the nose.
I know that's a little scatter shot, but there's a lot here that needs a bit of work. You've got a decent enough base to work from though, so good luck on your next draft!
I wasn't intending that to be a Gears cameo, and now after counting the letters I see why it was taken as such. Whoops.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback. :) I'll get to working on it.
But for now, I'm gonna work on another SCP draft. An object one this time, while I think about how to improve the one for Mr. Scratch.