SCP Foundation

Hello there, my good foundation! I EXTREMELY hope this thread isn't abandoned, for I am in the works of remaking SCP-2308! And quite frankly, I'm proud of it so far! I'm almost finished, and I've spent all day working on it. I'm going to double-check it after it's done. I do not want it to turn out like the abomination the first one was!

It'll most likely be on this forum by tomorrow. Tune in!

EDIT: Alright! Did it! I think one of the reasons the first version sucked so bad is because I had no music that fit with it. Also, I don't know if it should be Keter or Euclid. Marked it as Euclid at the moment.

http <—— There it is! Tell me what you think! And I recommend listening to this at 2x speed. It's what fits in the SCP in my opinion. (Except for the MTF-Tau-9 part.) I appreciate you taking the time to read this!

EDIT: I'll wait for a few days for some criticism, I might make a new thread if this one is abandoned. Since it feels… tainted.

EDIT: Note that it's still a sandbox. Not a finalized product.

EDIT: V2.0 scrapped, working on V3.0

I guess I'll post it on the actual number, if the staff doesn't like it, feel free to vote take it down.

I'd also add: don't make your comments in the "summary" box at the top too long. Otherwise it takes up almost the entire thread page cos you only see about two words on a line.

Also, your summary implies that Mary Sue's are another term for reality benders. They're not. Mary Sue's are (more or less) super-duper versions of an ordinary person, usually as an author self-insert.

Apologies if that isn't what you were saying!