Yeah, I've got no clue what's going on. To be honest, my eyes kind of glazed over when I saw how long the description was.
I'd suggest breaking the information in the description into addenda, especially so the recovery story is presented differently. It's easier for the reader to follow along with the changing subject of discussion that way.
I don't want to press any further judgment on the concept since I feel like I'd like it if I knew what was going on. Normally I'm not a big fan of input/output items since they seem too simple, but if the mechanism of the thing is interesting enough, I usually like it a lot.
- Remember not to censor anything in the containment procedures.
- You might want to specify which clearance level researchers are allowed access to this.
- You don't need to state "no further cont proc are required" because it's pretty much assumed.
- What is universal wave function, and if it's important to this thing, why is it only dropped once and never referred to again?
- Why would the Foundation propose replicating the machine and using it with SCP-XXXX anyway?
- I'm wondering why the Foundation didn't use a random digit generator to begin with.
- Might want to be a bit more concise with the test log. When I read "All seven continents say U.S.S.R." for a brief moment I thought the continents might have been talking.
- How would someone distinguish a land mass that looks like a T rex skull from one that, say, looks like an allosaurus skull?
