Item #: SCP-XXXX
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Item #: SCP-XXXX
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As SCP-XXXX is located at the Pacific Ocean, and may become mobile at any time,
Is it necessary to mention that it may move? Also, in a body of water you can't be at it. You can be in it though. Lastly, the Pacific Ocean is a pretty big place (30.5% of Earth's total surface area), you may want to narrow it down to some coordinates just to be specific.
If mobile because of completion, SCP-XXXX will begin construction of another SCP-XXXX entity
…ok
and will then shatter into about 100-200 1x1x1 (meters) pieces.
You mean pieces that are exactly 1 cubic meter?
Little is known about the crew that builds SCP-XXXX after the entity shatters.
Wait wait wait wait. Didn't you just mention that SCP-xxxx continuously builds copies of itself?
will fight off those who disturbs SCP-XXXX with [REDACTED].
Bad redaction.
The crew is occasionally dubbed as SCP-XXXX-2, although this classification is unofficial.
Why isn't this official? Also… how does one build a giant humanoid statue in the ocean? Where do they get supplies to make it? More so, what is it made of?
SCP-XXXX was discovered by a fishing boat about [REDACTED] miles away from [REDACTED] on 7/1/15.
Why is this important?
SCPS Valkyrie
Who? Is that a ship or something?
until SCPS Valkyrie was only 10 meters away.
Nautically speaking… that's WAAAAAY too close for two objects in the water to be.
Until a way to protect against those weapons can be found, it is much too dangerous.
So the [REDACTED] are some kind of weird weaponry?
-Site Command
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