SCP Foundation

Hey, recently I been brainstorming a lot on this one creepy as hell sculpture in the corner of my room that I hope to make an SCP. Basically, it just a little sculpture thing that was found during an excavation somewhere out near Madurai India. It has the ability to predict the future, the idea seemed good at first but now I'm not so sure. I don't have much yet, pretty much just an experiment chart and a few interviews. I need some feedback on this (the chart and the two interviews) to know if the idea is just dumb or if its okay but just needs more "umpf". Thanks!
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Note to Zyn: Sorry I haven't changed the pic yet, my phones camera sucks so I'm having my friend come over sometime this week to fix the note card thing with his camera.
EDIT forgot to mention this, but should I blank out SCP-914?

The formatting on the chart is way off, structurally and tonally. Like, there should be capitalization and stuff.

in catatonic coma

Isn't that just a normal coma? Do you need the word 'catatonic' there? Or are there like different types of comas?

I don't really see the point of the reference to 914. Like, what's the point of it? Also, it's not great to refer to time things subjectively, in general.

The interview logs are very much so just [Set up for exposition]->[Exposition]->[Outro]. Might be easier to have it be like a written statement given by the guy. I feel like it would be more believable.

Oh, and there should be a space after an ellipses, I'm pretty sure.

You misspelled Dashner's name at one point.

Can't really say much else about it without the full context, unfortunately.

Image is kind of cool, but the lighting and background could be better.

I like the image! I presume you're taking it yourself, so if you want to try and improve the background and make the item more clear you might want to try and put it on the ground on a sheet of white printing paper and take the photo from directly above it, if that would fit.

I like the chart of the test results because they read clearly to me, although some capitalization and formatting is needed, I think, like replacing redundant periods with commas to connect two related sentences where possible. I would also avoid terms like 'our' in the 'our unfortunate event' unless they're being spoken by or unprofessionally written, as it takes away some of the professionalism of the logs.

I only just posted my own first SCP draft as you saw, so do take all I've said with a grain of salt. I think there's good potential here because that's definitely a creepy little statue. Good luck!