So what i am thinking is some kind of humanoid entity, who can open a pocket dimension. He uses this to teleport to sick/injured people and pull objects out of. It will then attempt to cure/heal it, And fail cause it doesnt know how to heal people. It will then go into a rage mode and kill the patient in anger. The back story im thinking of perhaps like a doctor in the past before modern medicine who had an anger problem tried to cure a patient of something but he failed and killed them out of anger, then he proggresively got worse and worse until it drove him crazy, then he got his powers somehow and repeats the cycle of trying to cure patients then killing them when he cant
Ehhh. Do you really need all these abilities? You've got:
- pocket dimension
- teleport injured/sick
- pull objects out of pocket dimension
- rage mode (seriously, this in itself will garner downvotes. "Rage mode" is a super-silly term, not to mention unprofessional and way, way ubiquitous in video games.)
I don't understand how the story of an angry doctor relates to getting a pocket dimension. Also, there's no such thing in modern medicine as "healing" people instantaneously, so far as I know.
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I think you misinterpret what i meant. It isnt literally gonna be called rage mode, its just what i am calling it for the sake of the idea, cause i wont write everything in sciencey terms in the brainstorming section. Also its more just it getting angry not anomolous. And i did not say instant healing anywhere. Pocket dimension is just what i thought might give this guy the powers i want him to have, which would be the ability to take almost any object (or at the very least medical equipment) out of nowhere for his procedures he might perform on the person, and a way to teleport, but with a preference towards the sick cause thats just what he does. As for the story, i am still thinking of how he gets these powers and the general backstory. And finally to adress the humanoid thing, i do sort of want to do an actual object, but i cant think of anything that hasnt already been done. Still, all your feedback is appreciated!
Ugh, you beat me to it. ):/ That is why I would downvote, it sounds too much like the popular SCP's.
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Eheh, yeah, i noticed… Welp, back to the drawing board.