There are some obvious problems you can address here, like the awkward or just off dialogue choices (stuff like "Well, as you mentioned earlier the agent that suffered all those injuries, I can't have that happening to the agent that runs the suit. As a safety precaution I would like the agent to have a sample therefore he can survive the effects of the suit going awry or outside field trauma." is baffling)
But it's not done, so I'll assume you're planning to fix that. I didn't remember which one 018 was (though I guessed it was the super ball), and from that perspective this doesn't really "grab" me. You asked for critique on the hook, and I have to say that I don't think 018 is an object that is really gonna inspire interest. Outside of that you need to hook the reader with the story, and so far the story is not particularly unique.
Good luck on this though.