SCP Foundation

My first piece of work on this draft site was posted a while ago, and apparently my writing style for these things isn't bad enough to make people cringe, so i'm gonna see if this one has potential by asking the helpful SCP community.

By 'this one', I mean the tongue bottle tab of the sandbox you can find here: http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/l33tr

I was going for the 'what the hell' factor in this one.
EDIT: Well, I accidentally posted a whole new thread to tell everyone that I UPDATED MY STORY HEY GUYS LOOK AT ME
Speaking of which, sizeable update. Apologies for my lapse in site etiquette.

I think you've definitely got something here. Its well written, formatted correctly, definitely achieved that "what the hell factor". You even managed to use titanium for a good reason. It feels a little short, so maybe find a way to buff it up a bit, but honestly i think this is pretty good

Why would they test multiple times and disfigure numerous humans to try and bypass the anomalous effect? What would they learn from it that's useful, from a research standpoint? Why are researchers working for a professional secret organisations playing lethal pranks on each other?