SCP-2470 is to be kept in a containment cell in site 15.
I know you should keep your containment procedures concise, but this seems a bit on the vague side.
SCP-2470 should have it's EMP device on it's torso at all times and the outside of SCP-2470's cell must be equipped with motion detectors that will set off SCP-2470's EMP device.
*its and avoid "should" in the containment procedures, it hurts the tone. Also this is a run on sentence.
If SCP-2470 is to be moved for test or other purposes it must have at least 1 guard with a remote that can set off the EMP device, to deter escape.
This probably be a thing at all times, and what happens if the scip takes out the guard.
SCP-2470 is to never be brought near computers or devices operating on computer hardware.
The last bit is a bit redundant, I would expect that a computer operates on computer hardware.
The inside components of SCP-2470 seem to make no logical sense as most of the parts seem to have no logical purpose.
Could you specify a little bit? All I'm getting is that 2470 is super advanced and this is a confusing way to say that.
SCP-2470's has a helmet that cannot be removed (see Addendum A-1) and is the believed confirmed source of [Redacted]
There's a better way of doing "woah we learned stuff" especially since the second one is never mentioned again. Also you forgot a period after that sentence.
If SCP-2470 finds a computer will proceed to [Data Expunged] afterwards the device will gain a mild self awareness and start a self destruction process.
Poor use of a data expungement, there's no logical reason for this to be permanently deleted. Seems more lazy than anything else.
Once all files are deleted the computer will permanently shut down with recovery impossible.
why? Couldn't you re-upload the files. Unless it's a virus and can transfer to other computers this way. But the expungement from earlier doesn't let us confirm stuff like that.
Due to the breach of SCP-███, SCP-2470's helmet was knocked off allowing study.
They haven't tried to remove it beforehand?
The device seems to contain [Redacted] that has been confirmed to cause the self destruction process in computers.
So you permanently delete the process of how it causes the self-deletion, but only block off the cause?
The study also revealed that SCP-2470 is completely immobilized by electromagnetic pulses (or EMPs for short.) Updated containment procedures to reflect this discovery.
EMPs doesn't just disable electronics, it /destroys/ electronics
More research on [Redacted] recommended.
this is pointless
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