Overall, it didn't really interest me a ton. A weird pool that goes on forever is kind of cool, though it does feel familiar. The effect with the people being submerged in it seemed kind of tacked on, and didn't really interest me any more - it kind of just makes people super strong and weird. The writing and tone were kind of rough in general, with the sentences running on in places and not flowing well in others. A lot of the tonal issues revolved around redaction, and what would actually make sense in a document like this.
Summary:My second idea for SCP-2261.
Dr Avaritia 01 Mar 2016 20:34
Re: SCP-2261 (Hopefully)
Wogglebug 04 Mar 2016 02:09
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