I made a horrible mistake with my last post in that I did not post it here to be edited first, it was very bad, and I want to try to create a decent post this time. any constructive criticism would be great, thank you.
I moved your thread description to the first post and trimmed it above, OP, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn