There has been a complete re-write of the interview, a description of SCP-XXXX-2 ( which i forgot to write ) and some minor changes. Description of SCP-XXXX-1 will come when I can be arsed. http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/aeon9001
OP, please do not create multiple threads for the same draft. Doing so gets spammy, and is unfair to other writers who do not flood the forums with repeats of their material. Additionally, it helps reviewers a lot if all the feedback is kept in one place. As such, please announce updates in your current thread rather than creating an entirely new thread.
I've locked this thread. Reviewers, please comment here: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-1731730/first-draft-of-my-scp
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