This is my first shot at actually being a productive member of society, so feel free to rip me a new one if it's garbage!
In particular, I'm hoping someone better at medical terminology than I am can help me with the term "upper hemisphere" of the kidney, as I'm sure I should be using "superior" or something instead of "upper", and I'm not even sure kidneys have hemispheres. That said, please critique any and every part of the article that needs it! Thanks!