I'm currently pretty happy with the article I've written but there are a few things I think need work. The problem is, I've been changing and rewording certain parts so many times that I'm at the point where I need an outsiders opinion. The primary area I feel still needs work is the description. It says everything I want it to say, but I'm not quite happy with it. Other than that, I would like to know whether or not the article reads well, and if there are any areas that need major changing/rewording.
Alright. Lets take a look here.
Overall: I am just not feeling this. The idea itself kind of just boils down to gateway to another world, which is a trope that has been done many times before. That is not to say that this could not work, but it needs more of a unique hook than hostile natives. Something that will really draw the reader in and make them care about a color reversed world leaking into ours.
After several attempted rewrites I have decided to close and cancel this article and try again. I appreciate everyone's help, both here in the forums and in IRC. I learned a lot doing this one and I believe I can write a much better article now.