Under "The Ninth Month"
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over all rationalism he had
Overall the wording just feels kind of stilted and awkward. Like, I can kind of understand it, but it's pretty difficult to parse out what the sentences are trying to say. I feel like it could be good, the writing, but it's just hard to get through.
To be honest, I couldn't really tell what was going on with most of it. The structure of the sentences really threw me off. Like, I could tell what the individual events and characters and such were, and the way they were described felt like it might have meant something, but I just couldn't follow it in my head. I'd work on clarity before anything else.