As the title says I need some critique on how I'm doing in my scip so far. This is not my final draft because I need to add more to it. Basically it's a turtle that makes people believe that it is anomalous/not anomalous. They also have different views of its anomalous properties which also causes some confusion. Just give me judgement on how it is so far. http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/dr-rignaros
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Okay, this is a creature that causes people to assume it has anomalies or that it is not anomalous at all. But the joke is really weak here. It hinges a lot on exaggeration and this joke has been tackled with more wit and punchline than this. If anything, this attempt tries to use exaggeration and black humour. And I think they only make the work feel like a lowbrow joke that will likely turn off a reader.
There are many grammatical errors here, which I feel are not part of the joke. Proofreading grammar is important prior to putting the article out in the open, you know.
So you don't think that this joke will work? Well that's a little disappointing. In that case I'll have to think of something better.
As it is, I don't think the joke holds water. Unless you change the joke at its core and make it distinct from similar ones, but that is only a chance by then (as humour is always subjective).
Can the joke hold ice at least? Either way I'm just gonna move on from it for now.