I've moved this new draft to its own thread so it doesn't get confused with my Model Citizen one.
Feedback is very much appreciated.
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OK, let's look at this thing.
Right, I've updated the draft. Mostly in the form of footnotes, but have changed bits here and there and added a short "document" at the very bottom to add more to the object's origins.
Any more feedback is very welcome.
The draft has been updated yet again. I've included:
Okidoke, I've just updated the draft hopefully for the final time. I've polished up a lot of the description and the experiments, and I've rewritten the ending document and all footnotes to reflect a slightly different angle with the backstory than before.
Hoping to publish it soon if all's well and good, so I'm looking for any more feedback before I do so.