Any critiques are appreciated.
First off, I'd recommend going in and proofreading it. You have several misspelled words and grammatical errors that should be fixed right off the bat.
The concept is interesting, but you need to develop more of a story around "wetsuit that makes people invisible." Why a wetsuit? If you can, think of something about the location of discovery that might give a clue as to why this wetsuit has anomalous properties.
Seems mildly interesting. However, it is rife with grammatical errors, and a lack of any sort of story behind it makes it unlikely to grab anyone's attention. Has some potential, but needs plenty of work.
TheBloodlessOne, this sort of "read my mind" feedback is vague and unhelpful.
it is rife with grammatical errors
If you're going to mention grammar issues, please provide at least one example of something the writer should be aware of, so they know how to approach fixing the problems. There's a difference between typos and punctuation that a spellchecker can find easily, versus homophone confusion, idiomatic phrasing, those sorts of complex things that a spellchecker can't find.
lack of any sort of story behind it makes it unlikely to grab anyone's attention
For new writers, especially authors working on their very first draft, it might not be enough to ask for "a story". Author, so you know, backstory/narrative on SCP articles is essentially information that goes beyond the standard "what does it look like"/"what does it do" and offers the reader some insight on why the object exists, what its significance was/is outside of being contained, and basically why it's important in the context of the world rather than just as an SCP object. A backstory also helps a reader get more emotionally or intellectually involved in learning more about the object's origins or implications.
Has some potential, but needs plenty of work.
What is this "plenty of work" and how does it help the author figure out what to do? Good feedback in the forums gives the author a direction to move in. What parts of this has potential, and why? What specific aspects need work?