Thanks to pooryoric and Cherry Pict for helping me develop this article, and thanks to everyone who proof-read and gave me suggestions for improvement.
Date: 05 Jul 2016 04:44
Number of posts: 27
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There's my thoughts. Do with them what you will, I hope it's helpful.
Edit: Oh hey, look, there's yoric, I'm an idiot, disregard #1.
If this is an extended dad joke, it should be a -J. If it's not a joke, I don't understand how the personal note exists. And in any case, the ListUsers module falls flat because it relies on a wikidot name.
True the personal note is silly, but this clearly wouldn't work as a -J. Problem is it kind of sits in between -J and mainlister, but that doesn't mean it's not a good piece, or that the final note should be removed. Overall it fits as a mainlister better than it does on the -J list.
Every time an article calls me "CirclesAndSquares" I am kicked right out of the narrative. Hard. I think putting that in an article weakens it incredibly. It was a solid +1 until that, at which point I decided no vote.
a 1000 liter glass fish tank measuing 280cm x 65cm x 55cm
280 cm × 65 cm × 55 cm × 1 l/1000cm3=1001 liters, unless I messed up the math (twice).
I really don't like the final note for the unlikelyhood of "sirpudding" being a Foundation employee's name, the ridiculousness of leaving notes to your children/homoculi in official documents, and the fact that my parents would have told me if I was a homoculus. I find myself downvoting a Mann article, I suppose there's a first time for everything.
The note fell flat for enough people that I've removed it.