This is my first serious SCP draft. It is currently undergoing major revision, still feel free to drop me some criticism. (Also, it needs a name.)
SCP-XXXX-A projects its anomalous effect in a sphere with a radius of 7 9 metres. Any objects composed of animal tissue, living or dead, introduced into SCP-XXXX-A's sphere of influence will be converted into an instance of SCP-XXXX.
Instances of SCP-XXXX will gain the ability to quickly regenerate large amounts of tissue when injured. If said injury removes any amount of living tissue from the subject, the removed tissue will become another instance of SCP-XXXX and begin to regenerate into a new body, completely identical to the original body.
Things I need help with:
- General criticism
- Help rewording the opening paragraph of the description
- Ideas for improvements
- I would like an image, but I've been unable to find any that look good and can be posted here
- A vote on whether or not to keep Experiment-04
- A more appropriate name than "Ninja Pirate Zombie Robot"
Full article at http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/liampluridon in the first tab.
I moved your thread description to the first post and trimmed it above, OP, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn
Sorry about that. - Liam