Link here: "Sympathy For The Devil"
I've had a first pass of criticism, not much input that time but some positive. I've made alterations to meet all suggestions - they were all good suggestions.
I think this one's ready for putting up but I'd appreciate any comments or critique that can be thrown my way.
Noting that I've locked your previous post here: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-1756528/sympathy-for-the-devil-criticism-required since you've got an updated thread. In the future, please try to keep to one thread per draft, since that keeps spam down and it helps the reviewers a lot when all the feedback is kept in one place. If the forums are moving too slowly for you, I recommend trying the IRC chatroom for real-time feedback. Alternatively, you can message a staff member and ask them to direct chat attention to your thread. ~Zyn