Been working on this close to a year, if the file creation date on my computer is to be believed. It's gone through a lot of different revisions, even before hitting the site.
However, there's a couple things I wanted to check with before officially posting it.
1.) I wanted general external critique - especially from the community in order to have it more properly fit the tone of the universe.
2.) I feel like something's… Missing. I can't quite place what it is, but I feel like there's definitely something more I could do. As for what it is, I'm at a loss.
Any feedback is appreciated. I understand it may be a bit boring, but it's something that's been floating around in my head and sitting in the back of "My Documents" for quite a while.
You can find the article in question here: http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/gigyas6/ under the tab "SCP-XXXX1".
"SCP-XXXX2" is otherwise something that's still in VERY rough draft stage.