Hi again, fellow staff and D-Class. I'm back to request a final critique of my Ocean Puddle SCP.
(Quick note: I am sorry for all the Xs making it look messy, but as I've noted in the draft, all indications of the Xs will be replaced with the number I choose for the SCP when I publish it.)
I recently added an audio log. I'm hoping to know if adding it helped the article along at all or if it's just unnecessary to readers?
Edit; please let me know if I should add anything. Other monsters, exploration logs, whatever to make it more entertaining.