Alright, the main issue I am concerned with here is the portion under the collapsible. Is the overall clear or unclear?
Link to sandbox is here; appropriate tab is "Aka-chan".
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Oof. ;> (see below for explanations!)
A few comments:
'Oof' because… it is tough to comment on something you KNOW for sure you don't completely understand.
And, because the whole article is delightfully disgusting (urine, faeces… etc.!) and charmingly puzzling.
And, I can't help thinking of Mickey Mouse as the sorcerer's apprentice in Fantasia… <blush>
And, I can't help thinking this SCP should be used to clean SCP-173's cell.
… Okay. I'll stop here. ;>
I don't dislike it at all, but I do think it needs a bit more work.