I need the critics and reviews to tell me what I'm doing right, what I'm doing wrong, how to fix it, and overall, how to make this better. Keep in mind, I'm a softmore in high school, so any input from college level and above is welcome as I close out my summer vacation and prepare to start school again.
Before you do anything else, format your draft correctly. Conceptually, this is a generic thing what kills you. There is no further depth. It also has many common grammatical mistakes (to => too, its' ==> its, etc.). I would finish the draft and then update this thread so people can critique it in its entirety.
Ok, so step one would be to uninstall SwiftKey, as its autocorrect system is fucking me up. And I might need to start working on my computer, but since it's still in for repairs I have to work on a phone, and due to my screen being smaller than normal I can't see worth a crap when it comes to the whole thing.
I'll continue to lurk, and come back to make improvements sometime in the future. Until then, it stays in my sandbox, and I might try to pull this thread down. Thank you for your input.