Mkay. You already said you're aware of some grammar and spelling errors, so I'll skip over that.
Let's jump in.
- "The entity bears some resemblance to standard bipedal features…"
- I think you mean "bipedal creatures."
- "…(no feet are present, besides primitive stumps)…."
- Generally, you fall over if you don't have feet. It's hard to balance without them. I'd go with webbed feet here.
Past that, it feels boring. The picture looks like it's copyrighted by some one else, which is a no-no on the wiki. You don't mention the -1 anywhere besides addendums, leaving me confused when you start referencing it. You reference a 'feud' one time and no where else.
And for Christ's sake, the usage of [DATA EXPUNGED] in the recovery addendum is depressing. Read the guide here.
Hey, I'd like to daze away, to a place no one has known; in a state of mind I could call mine, and nobody else could own
Where I could hum a tune any time I choose and there's no such thing as time
Where I feel no pain, just calm and sane
Oh, what a place for one to find… .