Ok. You've got the start of a good article here, but it does need considerable work. Three major points:
1. Grammar and punctuation is pretty rough. Lots of run-ons and verb-agreement issues as pointed out in my line-by-line. Try reading this outloud to yourself, and fix it in places where it doesn't quite sound right.
2. I have an issue with the way you are adressing scientific conclusions here. You make a lot of assertions and "analyze" data in a way that scientists just wouldn't do. The researchers in this article make hypotheses that are pretty unfounded and conjectural, and the one test log you do have seems entirely pointless and adds nothing to the article. (Disclaimer: I am an IRL scientist, so this sticks out in particular, others readers may not have this issue.)
3. There isn't really a lot of story here. There's very little that makes this article unique or engaging. Try to add some backstory to this creature. How did the Foundation get it? Where did it come from? How was it created? Are there others like it? Try answering a few questions like these in your next draft, as right now this reads less like an SCP article and more like a Monster Manual entry.