Hi! I've been lurking for years, but only recently joined the site. I've scribbled a bunch of strange drafts in notebooks before, but this is the first one I've felt was complete enough to start the process of critique before trying to post it.
link: http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/capnthatguy, first tab.
Things I'm not sure about that I would appreciate feedback on:
1. The way the -1 instances actually float. I went with a reduction in density, because it would do what I want it to do, but I don't know if that's the best way to do it.
2. The ending. I'd like to keep the reason, or lack thereof, for the drifting mostly mysterious, but I don't know if I should add something else to the end. Discovery log, interview with a -1, addendum to imply that it might be spreading beyond the US, any or all could work, but I don't know if that would bog it down.
3. I know while writing this, a lot of questions about how things happened occurred to me (How did they find out it affected density, how do infected individuals react to all this), but I don't know how much needs to be explicitly answered. If you have any questions while reading that you think should be answered in the text, let me know!