Hi folks! I'd love some feedback on this first draft. I only recently discovered the world of SCP Foundation and I think it's great. However although I've read a fair bit of the site, I haven't yet read every SCP and every bit of lore. Aside from general feedback I'm keen for advice to get it to fit the style of other SCP articles, use the right terminology and have decisions/content that fit the rules.
I did some searches for camera SCP's and I think this idea hasn't been done yet. Not sure about the other elements although they'll all have been done before in some degree, hopefully its still engaging. Obviously its inspired by sci-fi horror but I don't know if its too generic, or creepy enough. Any thoughts would be welcomed.
I'm also interested to hear whether you like the addition of all the extra information at the end. It would all be in separate appendix pages, I guess. If there's anything you think that's good in the appendixes that I should pull into the main article please let me know. I wanted to flesh out how the Foundation might test the effects of the SCP, answer some obvious questions "why can't you just…." and allude to more of the backstory.
Horror fan, aspiring writer, videogame designer, and budding photographer.