SCP Foundation

Please keep in mind I have never written an SCP before. I just want to know how I can expand upon my idea and make it un-terrible.
http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/kpersfan
The general idea is that it's a house with only one room, where if you sleep in it you meet this guy who talks about a plague and it may kill you, still not 100% decided on what it should do exactly.
Still throwing stuff at the wall to see if it sticks at the moment. I'd love to hear what you guys have to think.

Hello!

First of all, that picture may be a little… problematic. It's very difficult to differentiate features, and it resembles blackface. You need to work on formatting, spelling and grammar. This seems like a generic 'thing that kills you,' and is missing a story. I recommend reading more series 3 skips and trying to find your own take on the writing style.

Good luck!