First and foremost, here's the link to my SCP Draft: http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/conn1496
I know I'm a fresh member, but I've lurked as a non-member for a while and thought I'd try my hand at writing up my own SCP because the concept and the universe ultimately interests me.
I'd prefer critique on the general premise or how the article is structured, but all kinds of critique is obviously welcome.
I personally feel like it's a little hectic right now… -but I'm unsure on how to better structure it at this moment, so again, structure critique is hugely appreciated. I also feel I used a lot of unnecessary structure tools, so critique specifically on cases of overuse is also hugely welcomed.
Be especially harsh on my formality as I feel that's something I slip up with just by nature - but I'm sure I can revisit and redraft any sections that feel informal or unprofessional with a little bit of focus.
If things overall seem fine (I kinda doubt it. This is my first post. Haha.), then feel free to just say so. It'd be a breath of relief for me, for certain.
Ultimately, thanks for taking the time to read and critique if you did.