SCP thing that i want help on, i just liked the idea, and wanted some help on what i could improve, or should have
this is just a draft
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Yeah, this is gonna need quite a lot of work. While the idea of some weird evil being that manipulates files for its own gain is definitely workable (see SCP-920-EX), the execution here is lackluster, to say the least.
The clinical tone is all over the place and the way you execute the "twist" that the evil being is manipulating the file is really ordinary, to say the least – the strikeout text and what it's being replaced with is too obvious and the note at the end spoils the "twist" anyway.
A lot of the issues here will be improved by generally reading more successful articles and Tales in the Series III block and executing the twist more subtly while preserving the same "oh shit" moment at the end. See the aforementioned SCP-920-EX for a jumping-off point.
Hope this crit serves you well and good luck, author.