Third part of She's A Maneater is up. I'm totally going to hell for this, but it was so, so worth it.
Date: 27 Sep 2016 14:04
Number of posts: 11
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This is a significant improvement over your first draft, and a surprisingly human look at a skip being in love with a doctor.
This keeps going into the direction I expect it to be going. Of course she's not going to be 'OK' with this right away, not after what seems like a whole lot of deception.
It does make me wonder if Lakshmi would have been more understanding if she was told from the beginning.
From what I've read on how you portrayed the character, I think she might have been. But then again, a story without at least some conflict isn't much of a story.
Keep it up :)
You know, I didn't come in to this series expecting to be shipping a bone wolf scip with Foundation researcher.
Yet here we are, eagerly awaiting part 4, 100% rooting for Lakshmavery (I know it's not the official ship name but it's the most fun to say out loud :P)
Upvoted, but are there supposed to be changes between past and present tense in the main narrative (not in the flashbacks, but the main body of the work)?
Arggggghhhhnnnffffqkkkkggg this really socked me in the feels more than anything I can remember on this site in a long time. Maybe since 348.
I like this series a lot.
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